vibin
vibin
so good
You should try making your own piece too. If you did, I'd scout you, because the pop-up text says that you should have an original work. Edit: msg me if you do make one
This is still a really good cover
That is so cool
Groovy
Like Before the Story, I love this piece too. another S tier work
Edit: Although, you did remove some of the flair and intensity the ~1:30 part had
This is one of my favorite pieces from Deltarune, and I just love this vibe so much. I wanted to make a remix/cover like this too, but never got around to it. I did make a remix of Battle Against a True Hero tho.
Anyways, S tier work
Lemme guess: Spectrogram?
Nah, there's just a TTS throughout the song that says "check your mailbox" lmao
Extremely repetitive. I'd recommend experimenting with new melodies oh just reached a new melody.
Also, if you have one melody pattern, and you want to repeat it, make the second repetition slightly different at the end.
Use notes that don't clash, and try and make some real emotion.
Sorry for the harsh review, but I think this good criticism to consider.
Also, use more than 3 instruments for a lot of the song
Yeah I figured this wasn't really good. I still need to make more music so I can get an idea of what I should improve. This was mainly made to experiment as I'm still doing that stuff. I will take your tips into consideration, thanks for the feedback though!
Nice chill song! although at 0:40 sounds off
edit: quack onlineings
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